سه شنبه 30 شهريور 1400.
امروز :

IELTS Letter, topic: a complaint about a laptop

You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a major flaw. Write a letter to the company. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain the situation
- say what action you would like to company to take.

 

Dear Sir/Madam,

 

I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction with a laptop computer I bought in your store four days ago.

 

As soon as I turned on the computer, I realized that Windows operating system was not installed in it, although the offer said it was included. In addition, I chose a gray laptop and the one I received is black. Moreover, the default language of the laptop is Japanesse and I haven�t been able to change it to my native language, which is English. To make matters worse, the memory specifications of this laptop are not the same as the ones that I read in your catalog.

 

I definitely need this situation to be solved as soon as possible. I made the decision to buy the laptop at your store, because of previous good recommendations some friends of mine gave me about your store. However, after this experience, I feel deceived.

 

I would like you can send me the laptop I first chose at your store, including all the specifications were shown in the offer. If I don�t get a quick response to my request, I hope a full refund of the payment I already made.

 

Thanks in advance for your response.

 

Yours faithfully,

 

R.

 

This is a good letter, all it need is a little more attention as there are certain language inaccuracies (see comments underlined in blue). Overall, looks like a Band 7 letter.

 

Click here to see more IELTS letters of band 7

 

 

www.ielts-blog.com

 

تمامی حقوق مادی و معنوی این اثر متعلق به وب سایت  آموزش خصوصی زبان انگلیسی بابک عبادی است و در صورت استفاده از آن نام آموزش خصوصی بابک عبادی و ذکر لینک www.english-ebadi.com را فراموش نکنید.

 

نظر خود را اضافه کنید.

0
/component/komento/?controller=captcha&task=display&tmpl=component&captcha-id=607052
شرایط و قوانین.

برای کسب اطلاعات بیشتر در خصوص دوره ها و ثبت نام با ما تماس بگیرید

کارشناسان آموزش به سوالات شما پاسخ خواهند داد.

ارتباط با ما