You have a pen friend living in another country and he/she is curious to learn about the major news items in your country.
How are you? Long time no letters from you. I remember in last letter you had mentioned about current affairs in India,___. Reserve Bank of IndiaReserve Bank of India has increased REPO rate by .50 basis points, which has lead to increase in home loan rate.
Rain in INDIA is too heavy this year same as from the past two years. Two years back Mumbai was flooded with water and all the normal life was halted for 1 – 2 days.
Our President Dr. A.P.J. Abdul Kalam, have finished his tenure on 21st of July this year. Now we have Mrs. Patil as our new and 1st lady President in Indian history. She has political background where as Dr. A.P.J. Abdul Kalam didn’t have.
After 14 years, people behind the Mumbai bomb blast in 1993 are being punished. Some are being sentence to death and some have to serve a long prison.
Take care. Be in Touch.
This letter is not bad. It has the right structure (apart from the first paragraph, last sentence of which should be in the second paragraph) and covers the task, the vocabulary and the structure of sentences are fine. The logical connection of paragraphs needs some work, because it seems as though you were jumping from issue to issue, instead of linking them smoothly.
Add some more personal touch in the last paragraph, ask how they are doing or what are their news. Don’t forget to sign your name in the end. See comments for detailed corrections. Overall, looks like a Band 6.5 letter.
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