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IELTS Essay, Topic: The positive and negative side of globalization

Even though globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.

 

Everything has two sides and the globalization is not the exception. Our first thoughts about this topic include the process of global “McDonaldisation” and, generally speaking, spreading the one, American, lifestyle across the whole Globe.

 

Firstly, I would try to concentrate on the positive aspects of globalisation. As far as economics is concerned, institiutions like the Global Bank or IMF are always focused on developing the �Third World’ and helping poor people to combat their life obstacles (through loans and donations). Moreover, the world becomes an area of sharing the thoughts (e.g. philosophical or economical doctrines), which become popular due to lack of barriers.

However, disadvantages of globalization are also widely known. Some people maintain that because of this process, the spirit of countries and nations rapidly disappears. The integrity, established houndreds years ago is on the verge of collapse. Furthermore, there’s a strong lobby of communists who reckon, that the globalization indicates uncontrolled reign of capitalists and slave work of lower labour-class. We should never forget about detrimental impact of global investments on environment – green house effect or soar rains are triggered by globalization.

 

To sum up, globalization has both positive and negative influence on our everyday life. I can’t agree with the popular statement that we should try to avoid being affected by it. However, we must not forget about our surroundings and local communities. They have invaluable values which should last forever.

 

This essay is too short (233 words instead of mandatory 250) and that will be penalized. On the bright side, it covers the task and has a sound structure on essay level. The paragraphs are coherent and logically connected by linking words; the sentences are well-structured and the vocabulary is adequate. There were some inaccuracies, see comments underlined in blue. Overall, looks like a band 6 essay.

 

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