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IELTS Essay, topic: Learning about the past

Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

Evaluation of the importance of timing is so important, many people they are sticking to past to show their present’s importance, while many shows that no need to even remember their past because it would not help them at all. It is very controversial and complicated matter.

 

Do not look to past, many people believe on this statement, for many reasons: Firstly, all of us had committed many mistakes which we would not like to remember, it will affect their present because can create some problems with our families as example. Secondly, instead of remembering those past trials, get the benefit of your present time.

 

Although of what said in previous opinion, many people sticking to their past to give them well push in their present. It can give you a way of learning from yourmistakes, and good chance to try to avoid any thing can lead to past failure.

 

Moreover, Success will not come without failure, every body should try his aim, even if failed, and it is a big success if they try it again and again. In addition, past is our culture and heritage which we will not forget it at all, it is a matter of value to our present, future till will die.

 

To sum up, in my opinion, we can not live without past, it is our value of life. Beside it can create your experiences in to solve your problems better in the future.

 

This essay is too short � it should be at least 250 words and writing less means loosing marks. The structure of sentences needs work and so does grammar. Do not address the “audience”, write in general (See the comments for the last sentence of third paragraph). Overall, looks like a Band 6 work. See comments underlined in blue for more details.

 

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